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Lies
Contributed by
Alyssa
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:31:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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call him a jerk-off
call me a ***
ur wordz dont mean nuthing
to a gurl that is burning
burning with love
burning with hate
burning and burning...
u just cant relate
these feelings r tru
these feeling r real
but people dont get
that thats the way i feel
y must they lie
gossip, and scorn
itz not like im easy
like i starred in some porn
people r cruel
people r rong
but at least ive got sum1
who'll love my lifelong
Copyright ©
Alyssa
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2003-11-07 00:31:09]
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Re: Lies
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
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impressive.... this flows so well, you obviously know what you're doing with a pen. None of this is forced, it all comes together so well to such a meaningful point. If your friends are not cool to you for what you feel, then they obviously aren't really your friends.
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Re: Lies
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:58:27 AM AEST
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you put your feelings well into this i enjoyed reading it... you don't need friends that are that way
peace and joy
JENNI |
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Re: Lies
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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| My grandaughter's name is Alyssa..i wonder if it's you..her spelling is kind of funky ..and she'd need the mod too..lol..and she's a good poet.. like me...lol and you... |
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