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i want to feel your pain
Contributed by
c
on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:40:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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deep inside
this soul, i hide
a painful, empty hole
i suddenly drop
i feel it throb
i try to make it stop
it's out of my control
with every breath
feeling floser to death
there's nothing i can do
the pains dramatize
i feel my body rise
i slowly open my eyes
and i see you
a streaming flood
of holy blood
beaten with whips and chains
the thorns on your head
why wasn't it me instead?
i want to feel your pain
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Re: i want to feel your pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:56:58 PM AEST
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Welcome to Your-poetry.com.... Lovely and inspirational..
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Re: i want to feel your pain
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:05:21 AM AEST
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wow very inspirational good write
peace and joy
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Re: i want to feel your pain
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 03:13:50 PM AEST
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Welcome to the site =)
I have to say, this is a sensational work of writing. You brought such life to the words. Yes, Christ's sacrifice for us was great, wasn't it? Words, even poetic ones, cannot express it.....
great job ; )
God bless,
Jelly |
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