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Let Me Go
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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How far have i really fallen,
from who i used to be,
so deep, i could be drowning,
so blind, i could not see,
inside how i was dying,
pulling you under my hate,
drowning you with my two hands,
God stop me before its too late,
i didnt even notice,
i was the cause for all your tears,
the reason for all your sins,
the beginning of all your fears,
and there i was always thinking,
that it was you who was in the wrong,
i couldnt see past my own rage,
i had been the cause of it all along,
and still you tried to save me,
but now your letting go,
i dont blame you for being ashamed of me,
ive sunken too far below,
i cant be who i once was,
i wish i could, my life is tore,
i want to let you let me go now,
i dont want to hurt you anymore.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-11-06 21:55:56]
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Re: Let Me Go
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:06:35 PM AEST
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beautiful write.... i enjoyed this one alot keep up the good work... I pretty much enjoy all your poems
peace and joy
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Re: Let Me Go
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:06:55 PM AEST
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wonderful write. I could really feel your emotion.
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Re: Let Me Go
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by Shmily on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:16:51 PM AEST
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This was a wonderful poem. I could really relate to it, very heartfelt. Absolutely beautiful! Keep 'em coming! Best of luck!
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