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Never Stopped Crying
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:35:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We resloved this
I thought we had,
but my tears
my tears
they never stopped
inside of me
i haven't stopped crying
the tears are flowing
down my face
they won't stop flowing
they won't slow down
the tears are burning my skin
cutting into me
it hurts
my heart is aching
my heart is racing
it won't slow down
won't give up
the pain isnt going away
the tears represent
how much pain that I'm in
I haven't stopped crying
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2003-11-06 21:35:52]
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:39:45 PM AEST
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Sometimes crying is a good thing!
It's when we can't cry that we need 2 wory!
Very good writing!
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by Shmily on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:43:27 PM AEST
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This was a very heartfelt poem, wonderfully written! Hope all goes well! :)
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:49:24 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written! I hope things get better for you, its sucks to cry all the time.
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:07:42 PM AEST
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wow this is a wonderful felt poem... you can definately feel the emotion it it ....great job
Peace and joy
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by Prince_Of_Rap_aka_MOE on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 09:45:39 PM AEST
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| nice... |
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Re: Never Stopped Crying
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by zeppchic420 on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 12:41:48 PM AEST
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| wow, this is so sad,so well, very well written it reminds me of myself and my past, thankyou for your comment on unattainable |
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