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icabod took it
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:32:11 PM in AEST
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he left with my heart
still attached to his sleeve
and it hurt to lose it
to someone like him
a wolf in sheep’s clothing
and i danced on the edge
of something so strange
in the middle of the night
i went out of my head
dreaming of fires and storms
they consumed me
he watched from afar
as i slipped neath the water
turning his back
he walked into the darkness
the sliver of moon
she tried to soothe me
and he howled at that
how much he hates me
to leave me heartless
hopeless abandoned
washed up on the bank
of nowhere near him
and nothing has meaning
for he robbed me of that
i sit in the corner
licking my wounds
wearing a watch
just to hear the ticking
in place of my heart
no doubt he has eaten it
and i won't get it back
merry
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merry
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2003-11-06 21:32:11]
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Re: icabod took it
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:49:46 PM AEST
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Very unique writing!
I luv your writing style!
Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: icabod took it
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:52:02 PM AEST
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I like the way you expressed your hurt and anger. this poem kindof reminds me of my poem the black rose. You should read it. Great write!!!!!
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Re: icabod took it
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 11:16:27 PM AEST
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| Merry ... this poem is one of your best ... I love the style ... the metaphors are great and love the ending ... Jan |
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Re: icabod took it
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by Chanti on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:17:42 AM AEST
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| Beautiful choice of words, i love it! |
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Re: icabod took it
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 01:39:55 AM AEST
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| dearest merry, excellent poem, loved it all the way:) hugs n' love nessa |
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