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Sullen
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart would appear to be as hard as stone through eyes that cannot see
Forever I walk in sullen loneliness
It chills me to the bone
The martyrs who cry and wail at night
Their screams I'll never hear
For the shattering of my broken heart is louder than the tears I shed
And every hidden prayer
Fairy tales can only be tales;
Myths, Legends, Lies!
Told to calm our yearning souls
While your handsome prince appears to be charming
A twinkle in your eye
His heart is as black as coal
And his mouth can only utter deceit and lies
Love is only a lie!
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2003-11-06 20:39:16]
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Re: Sullen
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:45:43 PM AEST
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Oh, I send my prayers to you......
I hope you feel better SkYYBLu, and you feel God's comforting arms around you....
Best wishes,
Jelly |
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Re: Sullen
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 04:37:16 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this although it could of done w/o the second to last stanza.
Love is only a lie!
Loved that last line made the poem and its sad but true.
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