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Foolish

Contributed by katzie on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 05:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Speak to me
Show me that you're here
Hold me close
To let me know you're near
Don't dare let me see
what is my worst fear-
When you have pushed me away
And left me all alone here

Please call me foolish for my thoughts
I can't describe how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
I need to know you need me too

We've grown so close together
Hun I've lost all independence
But they say nothing lasts forever
So far you're the only one that listens
I've got so many problems with my life
Hide them, it's what I always do
But you see through it, know something isn't right
I fear how much I rely on you

Please call me foolish for my thoughts
I can't describe how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
I need to know you need me too

Please don't feel bad- Don't think I'm saying you're unable to be trusted
It's my past experiences I've had- All my relationships have corrupted
Just show me that you're here- Don't give up on the first signal of my doubt
I need help knowing you're sincere- need you to teach me what this is all about

Please tell me I was foolish for my thoughts
I hope you know how much I need you
'cause right now you're all I've got
Please let me know you need me too

Copyright © katzie ... [ 2003-11-06 17:33:18]
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Re: Foolish (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:03:38 PM AEST
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I could say I do like this

Re: Foolish (User Rating: 1 )
by GuyJular on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 11:16:11 PM AEST
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Nice I like it

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