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Open Up The Gate

Contributed by sandeye75 on Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 03:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



It all comes flooding back
With one word from you
The sound of your voice
Your devilish grins as you beat me down
You feel alive when you are killing me
My weakness makes you stronger
You feel euphoric, almost god like
I can see it in your eyes

I have built a good defense here
C’mon bring it on
I can take you now
Try and penetrate my army
We will destroy you
I want to bring you to your knees
See the fear in your eyes
As I hold your life in my hands
I want to hear you cry
Hear you scream for mercy
The war is on

The fight is good, a battle of wills
Have I become as bad as you?
This thirst for blood is not mine
I feel your hate consume me
As you stab me in the back
You love this don’t you?
My hate for you makes me weak
It drains the life from my veins

You are far too powerful for me
Overwhelmed and subdued
I am unable to fight back
I am helpless in this infantile state
My militia crumbles under your weight
I have been beaten once again
The water washes me away




Copyright © sandeye75 ... [ 2002-08-23 15:59:03]
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Re: Open Up The Gate (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:47:00 AM AEST
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very good poem
makes a person think. "One must not join in there rank, rise above it."
thanks for sharing




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