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CAN YOU SEE
Contributed by
scottishdancer
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You do not see me for the person I am,
You see only what you want to see.
With a dull knife,
Your eyes pierce my soul.
I am dying inside,
And you can’t see it.
You see me as a freak,
But I am only different.
If your were blind,
Would you see me more clearly?
You can’t get past your eyes,
And see me.
I am trapped beneath your eyes.
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scottishdancer
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2003-11-06 12:53:11]
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Re: CAN YOU SEE
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:32:32 PM AEST
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| i have this problem oif first impressions but iv never thought of how it could change if that somone was blind ver good imagery |
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Re: CAN YOU SEE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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| If i didnt know any better i would swear you copied this off my daughter. she writes alot like you. she has so many poems out there . I really like this poem alot it is truly spoken. Keep on writing you have alot to give to others :) |
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Re: CAN YOU SEE
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:33:35 PM AEST
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| Very good poem...Keep writing...You are a good writer... |
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Re: CAN YOU SEE
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:53:25 PM AEST
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| It makes you wonder if the world would be a better place if we didn't see half of what we do see.....I think your right on this.....this is well written... |
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