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To Believe
Contributed by
Death_Fire530
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:25:37 AM in AEST
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I am the one.
I am the one you dream about.
I may be a king with or without.
I may have a castle or a kingdom.
I might live in the clouds and rule the skies,
As well as the Earth with my eyes.
I could be your fantasy as well as your scout.
I may or not help you through tough times for I am He.
I could be God of all
Even if you don't believe in me.
I am everything as I am nothing.
I am your imagination that makes you free,
If you don't want me, don't believe in me.
I am Buddha, or other gods as you don't see.
People fight over who I am.
When I am nothing but an idea to people who agree.
I am one who is nothing but a thought.
But I am also the one many people have sought.
I am God, the Supreme Being who is not.
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2003-11-06 00:25:37]
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Re: To Believe
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:17:44 AM AEST
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| Sorry to spoil your fun dude,....but it seems you have misunderstood Buddhism. Buddhism isn't about worshipping God. It's about happiness and freedom. And of course, Buddha wasn't God. Still, I agree-how can we tell if God truly exists? |
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Re: To Believe
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by Death_Fire530 on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:04:28 AM AEST
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"Sorry to spoil your fun dude,....but it seems you have misunderstood Buddhism. Buddhism isn't about worshipping God. It's about happiness and freedom. And of course, Buddha wasn't God. Still, I agree-how can we tell if God truly exists?"
You're right, I didn't understand the concept of Buddhism for I was fifteen when I wrote this. I've learned more since then. Most of the poems I post are poems I have written in the past when I was younger but the idea of the poem still remains. :D |
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Re: To Believe
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:24:50 AM AEST
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| Regardless of your misunderstanding of Buddhism, this is a good piece. I liked the flow and feel of it. Very inspiring and thought provoking. Good job. |
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Re: To Believe
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 03:28:51 PM AEST
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I'd just like to get my two cents in and say that I've felt God's presence in my life. You might say it's crazy, but it's kind of like being in love, or whatever. Love isn't tangible, yet you know it when you feel it, right? Well I've felt Jesus inside me. He's filled me with hope, love, forgiveness, a future, strength...... I know none of my words matter to you, but I'll say them anyways--- I love God, I know God, God is here. You may not see him, but I do.
I'm not offended if you completely disregard everything I just said. Really I'm not. But you'll be in my prayers either way.
God bless,
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