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Shattered
Contributed by
katzie
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:26:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Surrounded by perfection
Calm sweet serenity
Not a flaw in any direction
You are here and I am free.....
Too bad my eyes are closed
When this vision I can see
I fear what will be imposed
When the truth will come to be-
My world is shattered-
True reality sinks in
This perfect vision fades before my eyes
Prepare for real hell to begin.
I can't keep a straight thought
screaming voices I can hear
All I'd known is now too far away
Now all I can know is fear
This world it spins before me
I keep losing all control
It's too late to help me now
There's no use, I've lost it all
My world is shattered
True reality sinks in
My world is falling down before my eyes
Prepare for real hell to begin...
No one now is safe to talk to; No where now is safe to hide
Nothing good left to believe in; But nothing safe to keep inside.
The voices they keep growing louder; the pain it burns within my head-
I only asked one to confide in, but you gave a fatal fear instead....
My world was shattered
True reality sank in
Im bound in chains and taunted
-is that what you wanted?
Well my final wish now is the end.
Copyright ©
katzie
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2003-11-05 18:26:46]
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Re: Shattered
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST
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WOW this has got a beautifully dark flow to it, I was mesmerised from begining to the end.
Awesome way with words...........maybe life is hard to hold on to but your poetry is worth holding on to as a lifeline.
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Re: Shattered
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 07:59:50 PM AEST
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| Hey thanks a lot! I'm usually yelled at for writing stuff like this... I'm glad to see someone appreciates it. |
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Re: Shattered
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:40:19 PM AEST
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great write!! i really liked your poem .. I love those dark poems you can feel. Keep writing and posting I am sure I will enjoy all your writes
peace and Joy
JENNI (PURGATORI) |
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