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When I Look Upon My Scars
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:44:23 PM in AEST
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When I look back, when I look upon my scars
I see everything that was, that happened, that should never have been
I see faultless, blameless pain
(But I can’t let that happen again)
I see experiences beyond belief
And now I’m leaving that place, but it’s such a relief
Yet I would never take it back
I would relive it for all the friends I’ve made
All the places I’ve stayed
For everything I’ve learned this year
I would go back and do it again
I would go back over that pain, that fear
Maybe you can relate
To all the hate
That will yet abate
But now, when I look now, look at places blood has dripped
Places I have bitten, scratched and bled
I smile that I have gotten through it
I smile for the future I have fought for,
The one gleaming ahead
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by silverspectre on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:23:08 PM AEST
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I like the way this is writen.
It is sad and hopeful which is a great way to look at it.
great write~Silver~ |
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:29:45 PM AEST
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| I can somewhat relate. Good job, it gives a vivid picture. |
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 11:51:09 AM AEST
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Welcome Back!!!!!!
Through your pain you have grown! You understand with open eyes now,and that only means you will soar into a bright future! This poem just proves that!!!!
{{{{{{{{mydeargirl}}}}}}}}}
Angel always....godspeed,my friend!!! 0:-)
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:10:57 PM AEST
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I'm glad you've fought through your pain and are beginning to see the light. I don't see how this could be triggering personally I found it inspiring: a person who has been through some crap and has come out a head and on top a beautiful story. Hope to see lots more from you.
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by arden on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:22:28 PM AEST
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i really like this one. wonderfully written good job!
Becky |
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:57:12 AM AEST
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Bloody well said, yeah i can relate very well, excellent.
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Re: When I Look Upon My Scars
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:22:37 PM AEST
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| i like this i can relate to it well its a good write well done and its good u cud get through it it hard but it gets easier xgripx |
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