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goodbye
Contributed by
Blue
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:02:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dancing on the edge of the world they came
bearing their torches and light
they danced as if tomorrow would never
come
if nothing again could be right
they drank of each other's souls and blood
and sipped each other's wine
kissed one another and then they left
another day for another time
she spun on the water as he watched
his eyes were smoke and gray
they watched as the night was burned down
by the flaming light of the day
drunk on each other and self-mutilation
they kissed in the cool morning dawn
she sits at her computer writing this poem
he's miles away and he's gone
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Blue
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2003-11-05 17:02:04]
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Re: goodbye
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:04:40 PM AEST
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| hey thats pretty good ^.^ |
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Re: goodbye
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:41:18 AM AEST
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This was friggin cool the mood was totally gripping.
drunk on each other and self-mutilation
GREAT line
Bobo (Joel) |
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