|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Torment
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:15:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Nightmares cloud my vision
dreadful invisionments torment my mind
Will ther ever be peace from this?
My soul tangled and twisted
by evils about me
My spirit in shackles
chained down unable to fly free
Where is my salvation?
where is my justice?
Am I unable to grasp Happiness
In love?? What is it about me that is so cursed?
I can do nothing but question
my existence and search for answers that
never seem to be there
I'm always waiting....
waiting for something or someone
but it never happens
Importance of me is not known
My very being still questionable
What am I?
Where am I to go?
What is my value?
What is to come of me?
I guess I'll never know until
God answers me
****JENNI E****
Copyright ©
PhantomVampyress
... [
2003-11-05 13:15:45]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Torment
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:02:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awesome write from beginnig to end.
I hope god an answer for you.
Keep on writing and take care. |
|
|
Re: Torment
(User Rating: 1 )
by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:45:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is really good! You have a talent for it. Very powerful. |
|
|
Re: Torment
(User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:55:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great write!! I know how you feel, ever want to chat feel free to PM me.
Diana |
|
|
Re: Torment
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:20:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Thia> " I can do nothing but question
my existence and search for answers that
never seem to be there
I'm always waiting....
waiting for something or someone
but it never happens" is absolutley a stunning verse, if this doesn't say it all i don't know what does. I'm floored by your writting the way it takes over one who's reading it.
Ben
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
