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Dark Space
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:06:05 PM in AEST
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Robbed of my hope
stripped of all my sanity
I turn to the darkness
of this room
I sit here as if there is some
comfort to forget all the pains
I ever suffered
I sit here waiting to find
some answer as to why
all good must fade
yet it all ends with me
talking to myself in this
dark empty Space
JENNI E***
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-05 13:06:05]
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Re: Dark Space
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:32:38 PM AEST
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I totally know where your coming from.
Great write
P.S. sometime we must be in total darkness to be able to see a glimmer of hope. |
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Re: Dark Space
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:49:06 PM AEST
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| heh.. sometimes when I'm troubled (lol that's kind of a lot) I go up into my room, lock it, turn all the lights out, and just sit on my bed staring at nothing and thinking. Perhaps not the same as your poem, but that's what it made me think of. Good job. |
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Re: Dark Space
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:42:33 AM AEST
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| I go in a dark room also to think alot, sometimes i just need a place to get away . my days can be tiring and this poem sums it up thanks for a great poem it hit me . We all need a place to hide away |
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