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Crazy
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 11:58:08 AM in AEST
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What's wrong with the world, why's it so crazy?
As I look around, I see all the people are lazy.
"Oh I'll do it tomorrow when I get some cash"
Yeah, if you can get off your big fat a$$.
Why do the hard-working people struggle for a bite,
When the lazy people are getting high tonight?
I make you laugh, do I look lik a clown?
Let's see how funny it is when I turned the world upside down.
I'll shake it all out, it won't be funny then.
Oh what's the matter, NOW you're my friend?
I didn't see you around when I was ugly and poor,
so to quote the raven, "Nevermore",
will I put up with your bullsh*t, lies, and games.
Look around, can't you see how I've changed?
This little boy is all grown up now.
When you sit around and wonder how,
I'm capable of these things every day,
Just remember, IT WAS YOU WHO MADE ME THIS WAY!!!
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bigtig6269
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2003-11-05 11:58:08]
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Re: Crazy
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:33:06 PM AEST
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Re: Crazy
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by vanilla_flame on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:42:16 PM AEST
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I love the way you put in Edgar Alan Poe's raven in there, this is only the second poem I've read of yours, and wow you have talent. Keep writing!
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