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I'm In Hell
Contributed by
Zepher
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 10:47:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I crawl into bed with my back to the world
With my knees to my chest I am drawn up and curled
I lay there crying
I can't even sleep
I hold my breath tightly, so I don't make a peep
But the tears still do run
They pour down my face
I am thinkng of you and how we used to embrace
I gaze out my window
We are so far apart
I am dying inside
This breaking my heart
With the morning comes many more horrors to bare
I look down at your pillow and you are not there
No good morning my darling
No did you sleep well
Again comes despair and I know I'm in hell
Rescue me from all of this ever present pain
Please be my knight in shining armor once again
Copyright ©
Zepher
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2003-11-05 10:47:20]
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Re: I'm In Hell
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by maryetta on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:38:24 AM AEST
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very good write, i felt it, i felt the hurt, the pain, the fear it was all there. very good everywhere
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Re: I'm In Hell
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:28:39 AM AEST
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After last night, and my worst night of sleep ever.....This touched deep. Very good write!
You explained exactly what I am going through!
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