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Nothing
Contributed by
Emmie74
on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:04:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Why so bleak
Surrounded by sorrow
It burns within me
A shadow in my soul
None can help it
Myself? not a chance
I hear it calling me
It screams through my soul
It pierces my heart
Like a dagger hitting stone
The fire that surrounds
The ash in my soul
He didn't get it
How much I cared
We got angry at each other
Which tore through my soul
And now I am nothing
Just a cold, lonely vessel
For now I have lost myself
And so I have lost my soul
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Emmie74
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2002-07-13 07:04:56]
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Re: Nothing
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by Wiccan on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 09:49:39 AM AEST
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| I like this. It's dark yet it screams out until it's heard. Nice. |
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Re: Nothing
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 10:51:59 PM AEST
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Dark, yes, but also deep...full of feelings...I want food.
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