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GHOSTLY
Contributed by
mooncharmer
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A sudden chill
cool breath of air
on a windless night
scent of perfume
vaguely familiar
dark shapes
hardly discernable
from black of night
faint echo of footsteps
a sigh from beyond
creak of wooden steps
rattle of chains
somewhere, a grave
is yawning open....
Copyright ©
mooncharmer
... [
2003-11-05 00:27:46]
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Re: GHOSTLY
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:50:33 AM AEST
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| reminds me ot the very first night I slept in a haunted house. didnt get scared but I slept with 1 eye open. |
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Re: GHOSTLY
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:57:39 AM AEST
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Good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: GHOSTLY
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:23:58 PM AEST
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| you're good!!!!!! |
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