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I am very sorry..
Contributed by
kalika_vidya
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:10:43 AM in AEST
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Sorry my dear dad for I was very rude
To say that I hate my beloved mother
Out of my ignorance in a mood unfair,
You know the truth that I love you both.
In fact she is a lovely moon
And you are a shining sun
You both are a happy pair
Towards us you are very fair
You taught us a divine truth
And gave us a torch of faith
You blessed us a life of happiness
I know your kindness and greatness
With adoration I touch your feet
Please dad, forgive your daughter
Who is as pure as a flame of fire!
5-11-2003
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:25:03 AM AEST
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Great work!
How can he not forgive after such a sweet apology?
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:30:11 AM AEST
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Its o.k my dear beautiful girl..your work is superb...this looks like a tribute to me.. he he..I am very happy to read this. keep it up..
with blessings. venkat |
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:50:40 AM AEST
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| Ahhh..thank you..I am really lucky that you have appreciated my work..:) with love..K |
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:50:51 AM AEST
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| Such a lovely way to say sorry .. I'm sure he knows how you truly feel inside ... Jan |
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by ammalu on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:37:06 AM AEST
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| very emotional - touching - well narrated. |
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Re: I am very sorry..
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:12:02 AM AEST
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Sweet apologisy, with self-knowledge enveloped in it.
Greetz,
Hur |
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