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Surprise
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 03:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Terror gripping the heart
As you gaze around the parking lot.
Dimly lit, cars all around,
Keys out, Ready to get to town,
Shadows lurch from the corners and move,
Your feet pick up pace as the shadows prove
To have a form: human? animal? spirit?
Trying to calm down, Singing a lyric
Or two of your favorite song...
You don't remember the walk to the car being this long,
Gravels crunch and echo in the night,
It doesn't matter that there's nothing there as you take flight,
Running desperately, fighting off air,
Heart pumping, terror bare
On your face.
Thoughts gradually picking up pace....
Then laughing quietly to yourself as you slow down,
Need to stop reading horror books... nothing happens in this town...
Relaxing quickly, nothing in site,
Strolling to your car, made it just fine.
Check everything around you, it looks just fine to your eyes....
And then a gravelly voice in your ear says... Surprise....
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Re: Surprise
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by Emmie74 on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 04:51:45 PM AEST
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wow... i like this one........ i like the twist its got.... keep writin, your good.
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Re: Surprise
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:35:26 PM AEST
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good write that is why i took martial arts
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Re: Surprise
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 04:03:32 AM AEST
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That scared me out of my skin, but you have to be good to do that!
What a marvelous imagination you have, it matches mine, so when you get involved, so do I, but I don't know the ending.....but yours was really scary. Really enjoyed it. Do you read alot of Stephen King?
Warm scary poetic love,
lovingcritters
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