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Welcome to Hell
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I hear that angels go there,
to that heaven above the stars,
it always makes me wonder,
if that is really where you are,
do y ou know my name,
do you even care,
sometimes i almost wonder,
if you are even there,
did you know your children are dying,
of reasons unjust,
did youknow that they are driven,
by only hate and lust,
they fight theyre pointless wars,
your countries they deface,
they judge eachother by colour,
religion, beliefs, and race,
theyre minds are sick and twisted,
they love to watch bloodshed,
love means hardly anything,
and only to the richest do they now wed,
is this what you intended,
for earth to become a hell,
or was it the fault of your children,
the innocent angels who fell.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-11-04 23:36:36]
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Re: Welcome to Hell
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:03:26 AM AEST
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Very good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Welcome to Hell
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:18:11 AM AEST
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very good point of the world great write
joy and peace
JENNI E |
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Re: Welcome to Hell
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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| got your point across nicely, well done! |
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Re: Welcome to Hell
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:16:38 PM AEST
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| THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!! |
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