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I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 09:41:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She sat by the waters edge,knees drawn to her chest
Looking out across the surface,where the sun had come to rest
Sparkling like diamonds,reflecting back into the blue
Thoughts and tears of yesterdays,and this morning's lonely few
Not sorrowed for fates road,nor the way in which the spirits guide
More that she is tainted,by the guilt and need to hide
A complicated soul,not who others really see
Deep below the surface,undercurrents of more than she
Preening in the sunlight,ducks with browns,greens and gold
Feathers dropped then found,by a child,two years old
To watch her face exploring,all the paints of natures pot
Brings a certain comfort,a true "forget me not"
Her innocence is charming,eyes of fascination shine
Blonde curly locks,huge blue eyes,among the dandelions
With feathers in her tiny hands,muddied by the earth
She walks towards her Mama and returns the gift of birth
Between her Mama's legs,she sits and shares the morn'
Looking out across the dam,just hours after dawn
Atop her curls in the sunlight,her Mama places a kiss
Knowing every day she goes on,living for moments as this
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lovingwhispers
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2003-11-04 21:41:30]
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:10:46 PM AEST
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Awww Whispers, it's reading about moments like these that makes me want to cry..... Great write tho...
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:18:45 PM AEST
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Nothing like the love and innocence of a child to make you see the world in a differentt light. Left breathless again by your poetry my sweet. Kiss Indy for me ;o)
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:21:19 PM AEST
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Heavnly!
U captured this greatly!
Awesome!
peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy |
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 03:32:24 AM AEST
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| beautiful picture, we love them so. Crow |
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:13:31 PM AEST
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| oh my.......a lifetime of joy that is ahead of you........embrace that!!!!! |
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Re: I Gave Birth,You Give Hope
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:51:08 PM AEST
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| Such a beautifully written poem ... lovely images ... full of tenderness ... Jan |
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