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NO STRINGS ATTACHED!
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 08:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Many, many times
I've luved,
been left alone,
hurting inside.
Left me with
broken dreams.
Many, many tears
I've cried.
See when I kept
giving luv
everything in my
being was
at your command!
You could have
kept it
but crushed it with
grubby hands!
So I sent you packing
with no
strings attached!
Gave you back your
empty promises
no strings attached!
Not even a
goodbye kiss.
No strings attached!
Sure, I understand
we fear luv.
You never even
gave it
a chance.
Go down the road
don't even
give me
a second glance!
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2003-11-04 20:58:44]
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Re: NO STRINGS ATTACHED!
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:42:08 PM AEST
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I hear ya hun!!
I say to all like this.. "dont let the door hit your lily white on the way out lol.
Great lil piece. |
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Re: NO STRINGS ATTACHED!
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:59:19 AM AEST
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| well done..its a nice work..thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem..K |
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Re: NO STRINGS ATTACHED!
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 10:22:22 PM AEST
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Having read a few of your works, I must say this (thus far) is the best I have read. The passion is well expressed and is very evident. Great writting go for it!
Twinkletoes! |
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