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QUARRY OF EMPTINESS
Contributed by
justinblue
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Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 07:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This feeling of emptiness, desperation and total despair this wild river of emotion, I can hardly bear
This rivers waterfalls keep hurling me to a place of evil and hatred rinsing washing my soul of all that is sacred
Frustrated and mad, determined but still struggling to figure it all out somtimes i wonder if I'll be conquered, destroyed in this demonic bout
Some days are better than others, other days like a blinding, black cloud it hovers
It frightens and scares me like nothing else can, help me my savior my Lord fore I am only a man
I think I'm gonna die any minute
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2003-11-04 19:12:46]
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Re: QUARRY OF EMPTINESS
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 08:16:43 PM AEST
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| I like this poem too. And i agree with the lineSome days are better than others, other days like a blinding. good write |
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Re: QUARRY OF EMPTINESS
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:45:27 PM AEST
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I'd say you have summed up and expressed the struggle with nothing but honesty.Something I love to see in a write.
Excellent! |
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