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My escape
Contributed by
Sweetie
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Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 10:23:46 AM in AEST
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I woke up that morning not a thing on my mind
I did everything as usual not a step behind
I kissed my parent's goodbye and went on my way
For it was just another school day
I was 16 years old and very happy
and as far as I could see I was just proud to be me
As I walked down that lonely street
A car drove up with a man alone in the drivers seat
He stopped the car right near me
He got out and in the corner of my eye I could see
He was coming after me
I panicked and started to run
and he laughed as if he was having fun
He easily caught up with me and put his hand over my mouth
He took me to his car and lay me in the back seat
then he tied up my hands and feat
The next thing I knew I was at his place
tears after tears were streaming down my face
He took me in and threw me down
Not a single person was around
He left me lieing there all night
and laughed at me as if what he was doing was right
I woke up the next morning with tears in my eyes
I began to realize I was going to die
I was hungry and cold
and I began to remember everything I was told on how to be brave and have no fear
That's when I decided I would no longer shed a single tear
He left the house that day
just went on his merry way
leaving me to die
and I had to ask the question why?
Why me?
Why do things have to be this way?
why couldn't I be safe at home today?
I began to try to untie my feet until they were free
Then I realized how proud I was to be me
How thankful I was that God created me
and somehow I got my hands free
I stood up and almost fell
I began to have a dizzy spell
I had had nothing to eat for a whole day
and somehow in my heart I knew I was gonna get away
I went to the front door
I'd never seen anything like it before
and I found that it was locked and I couldn't get out
I began to scream and to shout
I ran to the windows and to every other door
each time shouting more and more
I was stuck inside
there was not a thing I hadn't tried
My escape was looking like it was going no where
It just wasn't fair
I broke a window with my show
I became someone I never knew
I wanted to run like never before
But the pain started hurting more and more
Glass was all in my leg and it really hurt
I managed to crawl out the window only to fall into a pile of dirt
I got up and began to limp I was getting away
This was my escape on this special day
I got a small distance when I felt sick
and fell to the ground on a tree stick
I lay there 4 a while then started walking again
and I wondered if the man who did this would suffer 4 his horrible sin
I finally came to a road and I waited 4 a car
realizing I had gotten pretty far
Finally someone came and I waved my hands in the air and they went by as if they didn't even care
Were they so blind they couldn't see
all the blood pouring out of me?
As I stood another car came
I feared that they would do the same
But they stopped and took me away
took me to a hospital not to far away
My paren'ts came to visit me
crying, so happily so very proud of me
I looked at all I had been through
and I couldn't believe it was all true
My escape was just the way I wanted it to be
I truly believe God guided me away from it all
ya know in this world I am very small
but my escape was so amazing so rare
and nothing in my life will ever compare
to all the love in my heart
for my precious gift that wasn't torn apart
I am so thankful happy and free
And proud to be me and I know it was my destiny to escape and see all my true bravery
I was so strong
and the guy who did it didn't get away with it very long
my escape ended so happily
but many end very sadly
I guess I was lucky I can't believe it's true
But now you see exactly what some people go through
so be happy and live each day like it's your last cause you never know it might be
Copyright ©
Sweetie
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2002-08-23 10:23:46]
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Re: My escape
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 09:20:06 AM AEST
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Hey, Christy. Well I must say this was very good. Sometimes it sounded rather awkward, but for someone whose never experienced something like that. (To my knowledge anyway.) It was VERY GOOD. Sorry I didnt reply sooner. I just never made it here til now lol.
Ne ways I just dont understand one line. "I broke a window with my show." What does that mean? Ne ways keep up these poems and if ppl dont read them. Then their missing out!
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Re: My escape
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by Sweetie on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 11:19:45 AM AEST
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Hey everyone thanx 4 reading I just wanna let you know I did make a mistake I meant to say" I broke the window with my shoe" sorry bout that! This poem is not very good at all so thanx 4 taking ur time and reading it I love ya
Sweetie |
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