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shaking
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:34:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Uncontrollably shaking,
‘Cuz I feel that way too,
Completely feeling,
Empathetic toward you.
Wanting an end,
To the pain we all feel,
Hoping to mend,
This sickness so real.
A tear leaks out,
As I hide it away,
No need to pout,
Bringing the pain to today.
I’m sorry it’s like this,
When it shouldn’t happen at all,
An unwanted kiss,
Will force us to fall.
Copyright ©
hardcoreputa
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2003-11-04 01:34:54]
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Re: shaking
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:41:53 AM AEST
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We all feel things, you obviously really felt this...what your friend went through, a good write. All the best.
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Re: shaking
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by joydeep_nath on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 06:04:15 AM AEST
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| nice write..has a feel of its own |
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Re: shaking
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:01:11 AM AEST
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that was beautiful, in a tragic sort of way. as realistic as a stab wound, i felt every word you wrote. wonderfully written.
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