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Poor GIrl
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I reach into my dirty pocket
and scramble for change just
to get a drink
A rich man walks by nicely dressed
won't even spare me a nickel
I put my head down in shame
as he hurries off
Soon i hear many children
I stare up and there stands a not
so wealthy woman with five children
she looks at me
reaches in her purse
and hands me a 5 dollar bill
says God bless you and goes into the store
**JENNI EFFINITE**
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-04 01:26:22]
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Re: Poor GIrl
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 04:13:13 PM AEST
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Purgatori
I absoluty loved this poem.
During this Christmas season I was in a local dollar store getting odds and ends.
I found myself short $5.00
appoligized to the clerk and proceded to take things off my tab.
Now I could afford everything,but just didn't have enough money on me.
A black lady with two boys and two girls heard what was happening and she walked over and handed me the money I needed to cover everything.I tried not to take it,but she wouldn't have it any other way.
So this is why your poem touched me so much---THANKS
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Re: Poor GIrl
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 11:37:33 PM AEST
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Such iorny. gifts from thoes we least expect. a most creative writter you are, i just love how you can come up with your work the way you do, so spontainious and yet the relavence it inflicts. like a ledgend, there's alway's a bit of real life in it. lovely peice i enjoyed reading this.
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Re: Poor GIrl
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by TheWildBeliever on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:28:39 AM AEST
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| this is real good man. a story like this gives me hope |
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