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I'm Dead
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 12:54:29 AM in AEST
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I died long ago
When everything i ever did
could annoy you so
When i told ya
that I wanted a kiss
and if you didn't feel like it
you'd get really pist
when I'd tell you I really
need to know you care
thats something you
never ever wanted to hear
when i really needed a hug
from you you would push me away
until another day
or when you got your own way
When i knew something was wrong
and I tried to help you along
you would throw a fit and take off
in a second
Whenever I cried you had a name for
me that was degrading of my personality
whenever i needed to tell you
when i felt hurt you would get mad
and blame me
Everything wrong with us was pinned on me
That's not the way love is to be
My heart is numb
my mind is blank
I feel no warmth
I think no thoughts
you sucked my emotions out
you drained my spirit dry
Im dead
**JENNI EFFINITE***
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-04 00:54:29]
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Re: I'm Dead
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by devine_xox on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:11:04 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem..Im sorry you wrote it when you were in really in a bad state but thats why you have captured the truth about neglection with in a relationship..Its a very strong write and i hope you get over who ever made you feel this way because you seem to be a very emotional person and everyone deserves to be happy...Think of how wonderful it is to be free of a neglectfull selfish person and focus on life rather than death...xox |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:38:02 AM AEST
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Yeah that is not fair. A good write though it is through a bad time...but one positive it to grow stronger with everything. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:38:09 AM AEST
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| we are mostly inspired by strong emotions like how you felt when you wrote this poem, i'm sorry this happened, but its these things which make our lives eventful ~Apryl |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:51:30 PM AEST
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| You can definately feel a sense of pain when you read this poem. |
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Re: I'm Dead
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by wheels on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 10:07:22 AM AEST
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You must still be reading from the pages of my heart. Very deep and very painful. A truly emotional write.
--kevin
The lonely vagabond |
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