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Love me love you not
Contributed by
EmSal
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Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 12:45:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the sun went down, the fire in my heart glowed. Cruelty etched in my bones, no love toward me you showed.
The sky is clouded and the water is cold. The wind blew the candle out and I love you was never told.
Betrayal found my open heart, the weakest part of me, but betrayal was welcome there, it did not need a key.
An embrace with no feeling, a love that had no meaning. A tear full of hate, a glass heart in a fragile state.
Smoke filled room, stinging my eyes, a relationship full of empty whys. The love in one's head, words written but not read.
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EmSal
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2003-11-04 00:45:46]
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Re: Love me love you not
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:03:44 AM AEST
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| This is such a painful poem...... my heart is always with you. Excellent write! |
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Re: Love me love you not
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by devine_xox on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 02:24:12 AM AEST
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| Very well written..I love poems that bring out a story of truth..xox |
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Re: Love me love you not
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 07:21:51 AM AEST
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Oh Em. I haven't read any of your writings for quite a while. This is so sad. Hang in there, I am with you all the way and if you need anyone to chat with then please message me. Don't bottle it all up.
[[huggers]]
stacey |
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Re: Love me love you not
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:44:19 AM AEST
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| wonderfully written vivid images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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