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Pentagram
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 11:11:11 PM in AEST
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Inside the sacred pentagram I will stay
Untel my mind purifies and doesn't sway
I want to forget about the pain of the past
If not im not sure how much longer I will last
Help keep me strong and pure
I need you to keep me sure
Spirit, water, earth, air, and fire
All the eternal energies my heart desire
Keep me of sane mind
Shield me from her and get me out of this bind
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brokenheartedfool
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2003-11-03 23:11:11]
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Re: Pentagram
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:56:28 PM AEST
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| aye....blessed be thee..sweet soul..hope you have been well....i greatly admire your poem. |
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Re: Pentagram
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by Avis_Nigra on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:35:51 PM AEST
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| I like it. Though I would have made a different between the four basic elements and the spirit, would not have set them in one line for in my perception they are not one level, but that is personal taste. Nice one still! |
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