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Your defeat
Contributed by
irshprnss
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 08:26:59 PM in AEST
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I stood there alone, way in the back
As you faced he who said you were wrong
You are finally living up to all you have done in the past
I'v learned we will never get along
You turned to face him, looked into his eyes
As I stood motionless and alone
The feeling of victory caused the tears to make me cry
Finally the strength in me is shown
Maybe I'm wrong for smiling
As you fall from your defeat
But at least I'm not crying
From the bruise that knocked me off my feet
So go ahead
Hit me now
It only makes me stronger
But now that I am strong enough
I won't take it any longer
Copyright ©
irshprnss
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2003-11-03 20:26:59]
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Re: Your defeat
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by Marco on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 08:47:11 PM AEST
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I like the way you have formated and set this up. It's so strong and has alot of passion it and that's good to see that came from the heart. It's only your soul talking. I do know how it feels so preety much we are in the same vote, but it's not about me. It's your poem that touched me so your in the spot light and i like that. Thank you.
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Re: Your defeat
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:17:00 AM AEST
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I truly like this poem...has determination and strength...hope ya have that in yourself. Best wishes.
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Re: Your defeat
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:26:55 AM AEST
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How wonderful that you could take a stand.
So many people in this day, simply do no understand.
You are decisive in your way, and that will help you in every day!
Make your stand and move on never looking back.
You'll never be disappointed with those that lack!
Great poem....much feeling and determination. It's known as Integrity!
lovingcritters
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Re: Your defeat
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:34:19 PM AEST
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Intelligently written with emotion and insight.
Enjoyable and inspirational.
Thanks for sharing. |
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