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ten thousand and one
Contributed by
Merry
on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 03:38:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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ten thousand times you were wrong
and i would forgive you
listening for your footstep
watiing for your touch
ten thousand times you were wrong
and I would forgive you
wanting the light of your eyes
the sweet taste of your kiss
ten thousand times you were wrong
and I would forgive you
the bow of your head
the slant of your smile
ten thousand times I was wrong
to forgive you
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Merry
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2003-11-03 15:38:48]
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Re: ten thousand and one
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 04:11:28 PM AEST
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It's a really good thing that you can forgive someone thats a hard thing to do.
Really good write. |
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Re: ten thousand and one
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 04:22:10 PM AEST
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Loved this...enjoyed the twist at the end.:>)
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Re: ten thousand and one
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 09:55:24 PM AEST
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yessss....to forgive is devine...to forget is foolish ;o) I liked this Merry..well done.
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Re: ten thousand and one
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:30:02 AM AEST
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Dear Mer, there comes a time when you can't forgive.....and must forget, him I mean!
lovingcritters
ConSue
Wonderful poem! |
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Re: ten thousand and one
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:33:30 AM AEST
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| I am the same ... and I loved how you ended it ... great write Merry ... Jan |
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