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the way it was

Contributed by loopylou on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:25:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i saw yours and what use to be my best friend on the bus to day after i was coming home from my new life
he insisted i sat next to him
how could i not, he has caused me no pain
so i sat their whlist you and him sent me on a trip down memory lane
as he talked i could not help but listen like i cannot help but miss him
he talked of you and everyone else i left behind with my old life
good things it made me forget your bad points at that moment for the first time in months you were perfect
and i felt rejected
i hear everyone in the gang is doing fine
i couldn't help but ask if i was mentioned from time to time
it doesn't seem like i'm missed
i wanted to be back there with you all
and when he got off the bus i wanted to beg him to stay
but i didn't i just said see you soon
he looked me straight in the eye with this remark then look away quick and walked off the bus
he left me with a see you around
we both know i won't
both of are goodbyes were stupid quotes

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-03 12:25:30]
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Re: the way it was (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 02:33:30 PM AEST
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aweeee....hard to get by sometimes without your friends and it hurts when you find that you wasnt missed but you know what....i bet you are.he just the kind to not say and as he walked out the door of the bus....he remember what you said and the thoughts will bug him ....if he is ment for you later he will come around....if not.....someone better will.....you know all this anyways..take care sandy

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