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Immortal wish
Contributed by
M
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don’t you give up on me,
Say you’ll be there when I come around.
I’ll lie here in my life long coma,
And your bitter tears of regret
Will eventually hit the ground.
I’ll understand if you can’t continue to care,
It’s not like it’s all up to me,
Whatever way you choose to go,
I know you’ll continue to shine;
Blessed be.
I’m petrified that one day soon,
One day, I’ll wake up and find you gone,
I’ll cry and stare in wonder,
At the emptiness of the room and the fear;
I’ll have no one to love or to lean on.
It’s up to you,
Do what you feel is right,
Don’t worry yourself with my pain,
Don’t ask me if I’m ok,
Or if I sleep at night.
Before you say your goodbye,
Please, give me one final kiss,
As I lie, a silent princess on my death bed,
Remember,
It’s my immortal wish.
Copyright ©
M
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2003-11-03 12:16:33]
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Re: Immortal wish
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 02:35:32 PM AEST
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| im laughing.....you are a very very good poet....enjoyed it....hope to see some more soon...........sandy |
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Re: Immortal wish
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 03:43:31 PM AEST
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This was beautifully written..tho so sad...
Jenni |
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Re: Immortal wish
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 05:14:54 PM AEST
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I thought this was awesome if not terribly sad. Good write and glad to see something from you... Hope to hear from you soon.
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Re: Immortal wish
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 07:14:00 AM AEST
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M, this is beautiful, yet another beautiful poem.
I don't know who this was written for, but that's probably not relevent. Hope you're okay..
love always
x_x_x |
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