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Hope
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 10:11:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Blue roses outline your gown.
Braided hair put to elegantly.
Your eyes are closed in our embrace.
The grace is seen
In every breath and movement.
All hatred forgotten
In your touch and gaze
My head in your lap
Staring into your eyes
You sing to me a lullaby
I fill with joy to hear your words
Careless nights that I did adore
Smell you oh so wonderingly
Scent of jasmine petals
Rising from your skin
Lingers in the air
Worries fade from me
Whenever you are present
Below the stars we held each other
Stillness in my breath while you slept
Hopes to not disturb
The Spirit War
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-03 10:11:58]
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Re: Hope
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by mercedes on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 11:52:51 AM AEST
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| I really like this one. It was sweet and peaceful. |
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Re: Hope
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 04:45:05 PM AEST
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Honestly...this is real pretty..and its not messed,it looks and reads great.Love every line but these really hold me...
"Careless nights that I did adore
Smell you oh so wonderingly
Scent of jasmine petals
Rising from your skin" |
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Re: Hope
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:41:01 PM AEST
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| Oh wow...... Cobalt, tis simply amazing...... I'm speechless.... |
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