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FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 08:06:23 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Life is like "Vivaldi's Four Seasons!"
Spring brings young, no reasons.
Then comes summer, know it all!
Sweat, learning experience, then Fall!
Autumn comes before Winter's Old.
Adjustments for Old Winter unfold.
Losing hair, teeth, replaced by spare parts.
Just in time, Winter starts!
Winter of all seasons, best rest!
Memorable stories of Winter's Old.
Better than really lived, are finally told!
Dramatic, traumatic, rheumatic,
retated, without any sweat, behold!
Back to the very beginning we start!
Reliving all our early days, young heart!
Rocking chairs may rock a bit.
We will relive our lives where we sit!
Course we can edit, this time.
Leaving out all the hurting crime.
Remembering just the good part.
To brighten an Old Winner's Heart!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
October 2003
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lovingcritters
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by irshprnss on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 09:35:23 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. It portrays how I look at my grandparents, and their stories. As they get older it gets harder for them to remember, but sometimes things "spark" a memory. Things like the change of weather. Nice Job!! |
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by norm on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 10:11:01 AM AEST
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How beautiful be this
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Your 'Four Seasons' you did so well
it's just like show and tell,
There comes a time we all sit back
The zest of youth we come to lack
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 01:13:37 PM AEST
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lovely poem
michelle |
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 04:25:43 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Connie....
Jenni |
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by jaeann on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 06:53:10 PM AEST
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| rocking chairs may rock a bit..........everytime i sit in one i cry...........beautiful write........ |
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Re: FOUR SEASONS OF LIFE
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 03:27:20 PM AEST
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Delightful cher, tres chere Cherie!
Especially for me,
For Vivaldi is my favorite next to Bach and Mozart.
The charms of each season are so well gone into, so we are now equipped to get the very best out of each season. A reminder, - my native Austria is a wintry country - may be like Wyoming.
Thank you for the lovely poem and for sharing it with us.
ED = Edelweiss
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