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RAGE
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 01:50:03 AM in AEST
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I waz late 2 skool, coz i bashed a kid
bloody punk-a** kids
got a bloody nose from that bloody kid
hate that bloody punk-a**** kid
Got 2 skool, and my frend hated me
had just woken up and hated me
so i had a fight wid my frend who hated me
hate that kid who hates me
Failed all my work coz i waz jumpy as hell
Waz nervous and yelled at everything
Waz jumpy as hell, so i failed all my work
so i yelled and waz nervous at everything
I know i got 2 learn 2 control my rage
but i'll kill yA IF U TELL ME 2!!!!!!!!
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Re: RAGE
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 12:07:34 AM AEST
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| THIS POEM SOUNDS VIOLENT IF YOU ASK ME. PLUS IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU ARE TRYING TO BE A RAPPER I DONT REALLY LIKE IT MUCH. BUT LIKE YOU SIAD IT WAS DONE IN 5MINS IMEAN REALLY IT IS BAD SORRY BUT SOUNDS LIKE TO MUCH BLOOD TO ME |
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Re: RAGE
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 02:22:03 AM AEST
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| Yea, i know i suk, no, im not trying 2 b a rapper, and u dont hav 2 discriminate me and say "YEA, ITS CRAP COZ U WROTE IT IN 5 MINS AND ITS NOT AS GOOD AS THE STUFF I DO WHICH TAKES ME LONGER THAN 5 MINS!" ok? |
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Re: RAGE
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:20:32 AM AEST
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| haha that's awesome! made me smile, i like it. especially the ending ^-^ great job! |
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