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Please be patient
Contributed by
mercedes
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:23:10 AM in AEST
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I’m afraid of you and what you can do
I’m afraid to trust, to let you have control
I’m afraid of the pain and even the pleasure
I’m afraid to admit what’s in my soul
I have met others like you
Though none know what I need
Yet I have met no one like me
And this makes me feel all the more dirtied
I don’t know why I’m not normal
I don’t know why I want to be hurt
I don’t know why I need you
I don’t know why I’m no better than dirt
I need to see you master
I want to know I’m truly not alone
You seem to know what I’m going through
You can take me to a new level, a place unknown
I don’t know how to say what I feel
I don’t know how to show you
I don’t know how to ask for your time
I don’t know how to overcome all that’s taboo
Please be patient with me master
Pride and control are hard things to let go
I want to please you, do all you ask
It’s just all so big, so hard to swallow
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mercedes
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2003-11-03 00:23:10]
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Re: Please be patient
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:48:00 AM AEST
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Very good writing and I certainly understand it tottaly so u r not alone!
Awesome!
peace, joy, luv, trust,
emy |
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Re: Please be patient
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST
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Ummm err yeah.. I think I understood it but if it's like mine it can easily sound one way and mean another... I liked it but I'm not quite sure what to make of it. The last line though.........
Sorry I did like it though. |
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Re: Please be patient
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by fadingaway on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:25:21 PM AEST
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I love the dept in the wording here,
It's just all so big, so hard to swallow,
sorry love that part. |
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