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Not You
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 11:49:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Curdled trust
like spoiled milk
to be thrown out
tossing you
out like smelly garbage
I go about my life
as if you were never in it
the plans i have and the choices
I am going to make
don't include you
Copyright ©
PhantomVampyress
... [
2003-11-02 23:49:15]
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Re: Not You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 02:09:08 PM AEST
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| I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOOD. YOU HAVE A GREAT TALENT IT SHOWS . KEEP ON WORKING ON THESE POEMS I AM SURE YOU HAVE MANY MORE TO SHARE ILIKE YOUR WRITING |
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Re: Not You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:01:39 AM AEST
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| i can really feel the emotion in this poem! Great Job! |
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Re: Not You
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:07:15 AM AEST
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Wow, i feel for who ever is on the recieving end of this poem. Upfront and sincere no in between the lines with this one. great write.
Ben |
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Re: Not You
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by fadingaway on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:14:24 PM AEST
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| This write holds pain. It's very blunt stating exactly the fact. |
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