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One of these days
Contributed by
michelled43
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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One of these days
I know you will say
"my feelings for you are strong!"
It is then I will laugh.
You had your chance, you blew it apart
I won't feel sorry for you
for it was my feelings you ****** with.
Now let's see what damage I can do.
You will say you realize what you did
and you are sorry but that doesn't
help you out any. You need to realize
that you're chance is over. Now
I want you to feel what I did.
I hope your stomach does flips
when you see me, I hope
you lay awake at night and
think of what I'm doing and
whether I'm doing okay. I
hope your moods revolve around how I
treated you that day, but most
of all I hope you see right through
your feelings and truly remember how
you once treated me.
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michelled43
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2003-11-02 19:42:14]
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Re: One of these days
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by katzie on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:47:42 PM AEST
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| You go girl. I hope the guy you wrote that about sees that. I hope he remembers it. I hope it haunts him in his sleep... tourments him during the day... may the words you have written never leave his mind. |
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Re: One of these days
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 09:50:46 AM AEST
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| I liked this though I think people can be overly harsh at time towards anothers feelings. Was there something going on in his life that might have made it even slightly excusable? Just curious. Hope the next one isn't that bad. |
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Re: One of these days
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 06:51:36 PM AEST
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| I hope Chris lays awake for me |
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