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the horror of:
Contributed by
Richard_Campbell
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:37:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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slowly we creep over the hills,
rock and dust falling still.
sound of crashes echo from below,
we push on even through bleeding and bruises hurt us so.
please there's no excuse,survival is the way to go.
cold eyes looking out,wondering if we can make it out.
the strength and hunger for life,burns deeper as we reach the top.
oh what a relief
we finally see destruction
you won't believe.
minds wondering back,
thinking of loved ones,
we fight back tears.
heart, just let us know what we are.
Copyright ©
Richard_Campbell
... [
2003-11-02 19:37:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the horror of:
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 09:09:29 PM AEST (User
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shouldnt the 4th line be 'even though' instead of 'even through'? |
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