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Gotta leave you alone
Contributed by
katzie
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You think we can keep goin like everything's fine
-like I would never leave you
Think I've forgotten how you've crossed the line?
- All the things you been puttin me through
Well baby you've got another thing coming;
If you think I'll forget all the lies you been telling....
I gotta leave you alone here
-tired of all you have done
If you think I need you you're wrong
-You've changed, look at what you've become
You've told me lies- we've had our fights,
The endless headaches- sleepless nights
It's gone too far to work it out
So right here and now........
I gotta leave you alone.
You say I can't deny our times together
-all the good things we had
Well I'm sorry this won't last forever
-All your good was drowned out by your bad
Always laughin and puttin me down-
When you think I'm not around....
I gotta leave you alone here
-tired of all you have done
If you think I need you you're wrong
-You've changed, look at what you've become
You told me lies- we've had our fights,
the endless headaches; sleepless nights
It's gone too far to work it out
So right here and now....
I gotta leave you alone.
So now it's finished, this is our final goodbye
-The tables turned, now it's you who will cry
It won't be me with the guilt kept inside
-It wasn't me who had lied for my pride
So I say farewell to your deceit;
Your lies, your tricks, your pride, your cheat;
Yeah I'm letting you go....
And I'm letting you know....
I gotta leave you alone here
-tired of all you have done
If you think I need you you're wrong
-You've changed, look at what you've become
You told me lies- we've had our fights,
The endless headaches- sleepless nights
So right here and now.......
I gotta leave you alone.
Copyright ©
katzie
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2003-11-02 17:54:49]
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Re: Gotta leave you alone
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:54:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to Poetry.com! I'm Bizzy (a grandma) and I've been on site about 9 months. You will enjoy our comradorie.
Your poem was very good. You expressed what alot of us women have said and done at one time or another,.... and what some others should do because some behavior is definitely not appropriate. You can't respect someone like that. A new friend, Bizzy |
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Re: Gotta leave you alone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:03:38 PM AEST
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I'm not into this sort of poetry, but the title drew me in.
Glad now I've read your poem, with all the flowing sadness hurt and heartlessness you were put through, I was glad you left that fiend.
i write alot of dark poetry and this in way sounded dark enough, you got a way with words.
Take care and I hope you find someone who will love you for who you are inside and out. |
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Re: Gotta leave you alone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:32:01 AM AEST
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that poem is great .. I can relate to it in a past relationship.... the same thing happened to me ... very well put though great Job =D
**JENNI E** |
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