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There I Live Upon A Hill
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:05:52 PM in AEST
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There I live upon a hill,
On which my castle stood.
Clad in armor of egoed steel,
Hiding in a dark hypocritic hood.
Indifferent walls surround my keep,
Keeping out things I do not want to meet.
Impassive towers guard my sleep,
Keeping me safe from reality's treat.
Sharp witted arrows arm my speech,
Cutting through emotions that rises near.
Catapults of humor keeps out of reach,
Any feelings that might try to appear.
No windows decorate my walls,
Nor are there doors to grace my keep.
I will be safe here in my halls,
For there are no entry to my sanctum deep.
There will I live upon a hill,
On which my castle stood.
For the world forever and always will,
Be a place that I have never understood.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2003-11-02 16:05:52]
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by SkYYBLu on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:32:46 PM AEST
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| I love the rhyming and style of this poem. Very nice! |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:52:14 PM AEST
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| Just excellent....very good poetry! Larry |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:53:54 PM AEST
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Nice poem. Keep writting....
Peace,
Philipa |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:39:00 PM AEST
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Fantastic write....
Jenni |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by brokenheartedfool on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:18:39 PM AEST
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| wonderful write. very good work |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:32:42 PM AEST
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| love the images, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: There I Live Upon A Hill
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:33:33 PM AEST
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i very much enjoyed your poem.. i think you do excelent work.. i love how you use such impact able words... words with too many meanings leave you wondering what jus happaned but many meaning with one word leaves you stun in amazement !!
thank you for commenting on my poem as well
~meg~ |
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