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Prisoner
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:57:37 PM in AEST
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I am a prisoner,
in the prison of the mind.
Shackled by fear,
and in doubts entwined.
Caged by emotions,
stormy and undefined.
Immobilized by inaction,
intrinsicly blind.
Chained by servitude,
by loyalty bound.
Waves of ineptitude,
hold me down.
Trapped by depression,
in coils of hate,
Separated from redemption,
by walls of fate.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2003-11-02 13:57:37]
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Re: Prisoner
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by irshprnss on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:01:28 PM AEST
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Good rhyme and meter, and good visualization. Emotions were discribed in a very discriptive way making the poem stand out. Good job
Diana
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Re: Prisoner
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:37:15 PM AEST
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Very well written..great use of metaphors..
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Re: Prisoner
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:33:01 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... can relate well to this ... liked your use of metaphors ... Jan |
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