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Confused
Contributed by
LiLFrye
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 03:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't understand,
Why you won't just give me the upper hand.
You keep telling me no,
When I was wishing that we would grow.
I know you really like me,
But it's like you're scared to just let it be.
I've tried to give you time,
But I can't get you off my mind.
So tell me what I'm supposed to do,
When all I want is to be with you.
Am I just supposed to wait,
Or do you want me to find another mate.
Maybe I should just let you Be,
So in my heart I can possibly be free.
But I don’t want to lose that love,
That love between 2 turtle doves...
Copyright ©
LiLFrye
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2003-11-02 03:55:25]
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Re: Confused
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:22:29 AM AEST
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Aww so sweet!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Confused
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:12:37 AM AEST
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cute. and yes i think its best to hang on in their and keep trying
smiles
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Re: Confused
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by katzie on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:51:19 PM AEST
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| That was beautiful. I respect any guy who writes poetry like that. Not that my opinion would matter on this... but I say don't give up on her just yet... |
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