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Love
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
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Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:05:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Would you cry if you saw me crying?
Shed a tear if you knew I was dying?
Would you laugh if I told a joke?
Feed me love or let me choke?
If you left would you ever turn back?
Would you mend my heart or leave a crack?
Would you lift me up if I felt small?
Grab my hand or let me fall?
Would you help me get beyond the door?
On the other side there's peace I'm sure
Just say three words and I'll know it's true
The three simple words 'I LOVE YOU'
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Re: Love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:42:23 AM AEST
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Very sweet!
Luv it!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Love
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by Peg on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:29:53 PM AEST
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| Very well written, I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Love
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by robbieb on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 09:31:06 PM AEST
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| So many questions left unanswered. Hopefully you heard the three words. Good Luck to you. Take Care, Robbieb |
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Re: Love
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by jaeann on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 06:28:27 PM AEST
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| perfect....i hope they answered......... |
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Re: Love
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:18:54 AM AEST
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| aww, so sweet. i often ask myself if my love would do those things or not. great flow and poem, awesome! |
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