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The Angel
Contributed by
Crow
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Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:26:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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She was just turning five,
able to read and write.
Had a smile that would
brighten each day.
She would bring him story books,
he never had time to look,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
Time at hand know,
time to see know,
there was an angel right by his side.
One day will change all things,
this day her life came to an to end...
words of a father as I held her close.
Never thought i`d walk with an angel
talk with an angel,
wipe the tears, from an angel`s eyes.
Never thought an angel would love me,
and as I held her close,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
I heard an angel whisper good-by......Crow
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2003-11-02 00:26:30]
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Re: The Angel
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:36:58 AM AEST
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you have no idea how this touched me...
i heard an angel whisper good-bye..... yes!!!! |
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Re: The Angel
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:49:39 AM AEST
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"Never thought an angel would love me,
and as I held her close,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
I heard an angel whisper good-by......"
These lines held my hearts breath...
The whole write brings a tear yet there is a comfort in the way you have expressed this.
So sad... |
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Re: The Angel
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:11:51 AM AEST
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Sigh.......
Jenni |
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Re: The Angel
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:39:21 AM AEST
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Wow! I agree with everyone else. It's tottaly awesome and very moving!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: The Angel
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:43:54 AM AEST
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this is very inspiring tells me we should take the time for people.
kody |
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Re: The Angel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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thanks Kody, messed it up a little, but your right we should, about the only thing we can`t get back "time.
thank you all! for allowing a few mistakes. |
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Re: The Angel
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 08:57:47 AM AEST
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Another sigh..... This time I'll add that this is truly heart-breaking... Life is so unfair.....
Hugs
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