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Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:12:58 PM in AEST
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Come away with me, he had whispered...
Smiling into her soul
Hold my hand, stroll through my heart.
Let me wipe the tears of old
Silence held all of her emotions...
As his words cocooned her fears
Wrapped up in the safe arms of love
She offered up some of her tears
Placing them into his comfort...
One by one,yet just a few
She gave to the one who touched her
For because of him,trust grew
Believe in my heart as it speaks...
He'd told her time and time again
I have come only to love you
I'd die before I gave pain
Her face lifted to his sunlight
Holding her eyes with his heart
It took just a moments soft gaze
To know from him,she'd never part
Into the night,they strolled
Hand in hand,facing her fears
One by one, they fell to their death
As she looked on with happy tears
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by Merry on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:39:52 PM AEST
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love is a sweet thing and trust is at the very heart of it. Lovely tender write
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by Philipa on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:43:04 PM AEST
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Lovely poem.
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 09:11:09 PM AEST
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This is so heart touching for me sharon.
You always have a way of pulling the harp strings of my heart....the last line really got me. "as she looked on with happy tears"
Oh that was moving...and took me a place I haven't thought about for 32 years.
I tried to reach you by email....but they all came back. I just posted a poem that you once again inspired me to do. I hope you don't mind, I mentioned your name.
Lovingcritters
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:45:44 PM AEST
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| oh wow..........this is so how i felt many a year ago.......i hope yours lasts as long as mine has............beautiful write........ |
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:15:49 PM AEST
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| A beautiful love story :o) The only tears you should shed are tears of happiness. Roses |
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:38:31 PM AEST
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| I know these feelings well ... such a beautiful write Sharon ... I loved the ending so much ... Jan |
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Re: Death Of Fear,Birth Of Smile
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 11:37:16 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully done maam. --Russ |
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