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your words were spoken
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 05:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nowadays love gets pushed out and I feel complete desperation,
I take this pressure to the point of bloody explosion,
Death no longer has a negative sound,
Worship hate that’s what I have found,
Days are violently distressful,
Nights dawn noisy and unfruitful,
Now this is how I feel when your words were spoken,
On that sunny day when my heart was broken,
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2003-11-01 17:37:07]
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Re: your words were spoken
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by brokenheartedfool on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 05:53:33 PM AEST
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| Good write. I like the way you worded it. |
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Re: your words were spoken
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:23:44 PM AEST
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I really Like this poem, I liked the way that you used big word that had big meanings..........good write
~Brittany~ |
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